SWA #21

• The focus of this paper was the issue of the Occupy movement.  They take the first paragraph to describe the importance of this issue to America.
• The four perspectives in this paper were that of the actual protesters, indirect sympathizers, college students, and Tracey Vitchers.  The four perspectives were a little hard to recognize initially.  There doesn't seem to be a clear thesis.
• The introduction and the conclusion were the best parts of this paper, but still should be reworked to contain a strong thesis.
• I would say that the essay is very informative but I don't know if I could call it effective.  It didn't spend enough time elaborating on the four perspectives.